Beneath the Traffic Distance
I traveled a long time to this island,
to pursue my education here.
When beyond the distant traffic,
I saw a pretty, young woman.
Sparkles from her vision,
journeying so friendly to the haven of my heart,
acquainting and uniting.
Her eyes were full of sensations,
I captured with my living admiration.
Her reddish lips which sealed by affections,
called to me with clear approbation.
How sweet and sincere was her smile,
her glowing face and blooming beauty captured mine.
Along an honest doorway,
her eyesight ruled the intimate way.
Whoever has seen her prettiness,
adoration is the most luxurious consideration.
She is filled with ardent romances,
She is surrounded with loveliness,
like the fresh red rose in the flowering garden.
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wow! attraction can make poets out of anyone including me haha!
fiveloaf
November 9, 2010 at 8:00 am
Words are crafted beautifully in your poem…Enjoyed it!
uma.a
November 9, 2010 at 1:21 pm
Thanks a lot for visiting and reading my poem. Good day.
cesargealogo
November 10, 2010 at 3:30 am
She sounds divine… can I meet her? 😉
All the best
Luke
(mine are here-
http://wp.me/pTeVg-cx
http://wp.me/pTeVg-cP
Luke Prater
November 9, 2010 at 11:03 pm
Thank you Luke, I have only meet her three times and after that I have no communication at all with her. She is really a beautiful lady.
cesargealogo
November 10, 2010 at 3:29 am
A bliss to see you in…
lovely work.
Thanks for linking…
Jingle
November 10, 2010 at 12:09 am
Thank you Jingle and I always find time to join and give comments to other poet’s work. God bless us always.
cesargealogo
November 10, 2010 at 3:27 am
I CAN NOT DENY THAT I DID NOT ENJOY THIS STRONG MESSAGE. I LOVE THIS AND ITS THEME
ogungbesan20
November 10, 2010 at 8:22 am
I respect your thoughts and opinion. I encourage you to read more.
cesargealogo
November 11, 2010 at 2:01 am
Its beautifully and simply written beginning of a love story… I enjoyed it.
Thanks for sharing…
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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Shashi
November 10, 2010 at 9:48 am
Thank you.
cesargealogo
November 11, 2010 at 1:59 am
great poetry. nice use of language and wonderful images. excellent job!
industrialarts
November 11, 2010 at 7:01 pm
Thanks a lot.
cesargealogo
November 12, 2010 at 12:28 am
how are you?
you have got talent here, welcome to attend poets rally week 35, where you share your poetry and make new poetic friends…poetry awards are assigned upon completion.
let me know when you are ready.
Merry Christmas…
keep writing…
Jingle
December 16, 2010 at 2:56 pm
Hello Jingle,
I am just fine Jingle, and sorry for being away for a number of days, but I will definitely be back for a short moment after I have finished building up my site: http://www.cesargealogo.com
Have a wonderful day always!
Kind regards to all,
Cesar
cesargealogo
December 17, 2010 at 1:45 am
Enchanting words indeed.
dasuntoucha
December 18, 2010 at 2:57 pm
how are you?
wishing you the best.
share one piece with us today, make more friends…
bless you.
xx
Promising Poets Parking Lot
March 27, 2011 at 1:45 am
ha,ha, beautiful.
net
April 4, 2014 at 9:13 am