Whisper of Life

written by Cesar Gealogo

Emptiness

with 26 comments

Every time I walk

In this camp of deafening silence

I always feel the very emptiness

Of my wounded heart

 

I want to embrace and kiss with my beloved

I want to sing and dance with my beloved

I want to play and laugh with my beloved

But I can’t for I am far from my beloved

 

She is in the city

I am in the hinterland

She is in the city of temptation

I am in the hinterland of belonging

 

I can’t endure this life of mine

I can’t resist the belonging of my heart

I can’t afford not to feel her love

For I love her deeply

 

Related article: http://www.cesargealogo.com

Note: This poem was written way back in the year 2000 in the camp of 141st Company of Regional Mobile Group located at Taganito, Claver, Surigao del Norte.

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  1. lovely longing…
    well said.
    hope that you got what you wanted.

    Jingle

    October 5, 2010 at 2:34 am

  2. 10 years ago,
    well,
    sweet reminder I guess…

    thanks for sharing..
    love your supportive attitude.
    have fun!

    Jingle

    October 5, 2010 at 2:35 am

  3. IN the city of temptation… beautifully said.. thanks for sharing.. Cesar.

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
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    Shashi

    October 5, 2010 at 1:40 pm

  4. Very precious, the longing to be with one’s love.

    Kristen Haskell

    October 5, 2010 at 5:51 pm

  5. very nice poem, felt every word…

    William Manson

    October 5, 2010 at 9:08 pm

  6. Fine poem on love, longing, and loneliness. Moving.

    Taganito, Claver, Surigao del Norte… the Phillipines? Are you anywhere near Illiagan?

    Jamie Dedes

    October 5, 2010 at 11:17 pm

  7. support us by visiting a few poets near your entry.
    thanks for the contribution…

    here is one of mine:
    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/04/what-can-you-see/

    Jingle

    October 6, 2010 at 12:34 am

  8. the sense of longing comes through very strongly here; well written. thanks for sharing.

    siubhan

    October 6, 2010 at 1:45 am

  9. Man, this really pulled on my heartstrings.
    I haven’t had a tear wet my dry face for a long time.
    Thanks man.
    Peace to you and your beloved…

    notjeffery

    October 6, 2010 at 2:13 pm

  10. I was in this shoes some time back and trust me I hated it…had to break free from it…I hate being engaged to an almost impossible task.

    Emmanuel Ibok

    October 6, 2010 at 6:27 pm

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    katrice

    October 7, 2010 at 5:31 am

  13. “I can’t resist the belonging of my heart

    I can’t afford not to feel her love”
    This is wonderful.
    I love your repetition as well.
    Very nice poem.

    Evelyn

    October 30, 2010 at 1:19 pm

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